The Coldmaker by Daniel A Cohen reviewed

The Coldmake Book Cover The Coldmake
Daniel A Cohen
Fantasy
Harper Voyager
November 2, 2017
ebook
336
NetGalley

Eight hundred years ago, the Jadans angered the Crier. In punishment, the Crier took their Cold away, condemning them to a life of enslavement in a world bathed in heat.

Or so the tale goes.

During the day, as the Sun blazes over his head, Micah leads the life of any Jadan slave, running errands through the city of Paphos at the mercy of the petty Nobles and ruthless taskmasters.

But after the evening bells have tolled and all other Jadans sleep, Micah escapes into the night in search of scraps and broken objects, which once back inside his barracks he tinkers into treasures.

However, when a mysterious masked Jadan publicly threatens Noble authority, a wave of rebellion ripples through the city.

With Paphos plunged into turmoil, Micah’s secret is at risk of being exposed. And another, which has been waiting hundreds of years to be found, is also on the verge of discovery…

The secret of Cold

The idea of what may be a post apocalyptic world which is blazingly hot and makes “cold” an exceptionally valuable commodity intrigued me. I’d not come across the idea before. The Coldmaker by Daniel A Cohen follows Micah in such a world. He is effectively the lowest of the low and, in the hierarchy of the world, is “unworthy”. He is bright, he tinkers and is an inventor.

Micah uses his talents and meets folk who are interested in those talents while a slave to the Nobles which is essentially what Jadens are. The big question – other than how to keep cool – is whether the Jadens should be subservient to the Nobles. The Nobles currently rule by fear and abuse of power claiming to have the right from their religion and the Khat.

This is a book I really wanted to enjoy. The story outline looked interesting and different. However I never really found myself fully engaged with the story. I’ve taken a little time after finishing this to try and work out why. It took me a little while to understand the rules and power structure of this world. I’m actually still not sure that I fully grasp why the world is the way it is but it has been like it for 800 years. I found a number of the characters interesting but they did not seem fully developed for me.

Micah’s inventions bother me. They often seem remarkable and there is not always much information on how they work or how he came to the conclusion that they would work. My final point is on the general tone of the book. Everything I’ve read about it suggests it is an adult book.  There are aspects of the treatment of Jadens that make for uneasy reading. However, while I realise that Micah is a young teenager, the tone of the story feels like it is aimed more at a YA market. Not a bad read but I would have loved it to be better.

Note – I received an advance digital copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for a fair review

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